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Monday, 23 July 2018

my holidays

On my Holidays Braye, Lakyn, mum, dad and I went to Hokitika and did the treetop walk. On the large tower, I had a booklet and said to mum can I drop it down to you and she said yes so I dropped it and it landed in a tree but we still had one more.

6 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 July 2018 at 11:32

    Hey Kohen I really like your Blog profile it looks really good.

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  2. Anonymous25 July 2018 at 11:40

    Hi kohen i like your hoildays i went to the Hokitika tree top walk.

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  3. Anonymous10 September 2018 at 18:38

    Hi Kohen.
    I like that you have included Who you went with and what you did on your holidays. Next time you could make it a bit longer.

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  4. Carlos12 September 2018 at 12:42

    Kia ora kohen i really liked the bit about the booklet.
    Maybe you could write more about the tree top walk.

    From Carlos

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