Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
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I like the part when they were watching the fireworks by the water.Next time more punctuation would be good because so it is easy to read.Did you do this all by yourself?
No I had help by Aly.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
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ReplyDeleteI like the part when they were watching the fireworks by the water.
ReplyDeleteNext time more punctuation would be good because so it is easy to read.
Did you do this all by yourself?
No I had help by Aly.
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