Thursday 7 March 2019

Dear humans



Dear humans,


Please stop leaving your rubbish lying around because there are truckloads of plastic getting dumped into our ocean each minute!!


My little brother was sick because of all the rubbish lying around.


I like jellyfish but since you put the plastic in the ocean I eat this.



6 comments:

  1. Ka mau te wehi Kohen! It looks like you have done some really interesting learning with Mrs Walklin. I love how you have explained why people need to stop dumping rubbish. Maybe next time you could explain a bit more about why animals are eating plastic bags instead of jelly fish?

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  2. I agree kohen we need to stop leaving rubbish behind us.Feedback don't use that font.

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  4. Hi Kohen, It’s Jack here I love this post, I’m just curious of how you’re brother got sick from the things people have thrown out the window, Do you know?

    Thanks.

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  5. Ciao, Caitlin B here very interesting piece, rubbish is a very big problem these days. Next time to be BTB give us a bit more information on why rubbish is so bad, I really liked this piece especially how you also related yourself it, ka pai 👍🏼

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