poem writing

Today we as a class are learning to write poems with onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia is the use of a word or words which sound like what they are describing. E.g. crash, buzz, smash, woof. And this is my poem I wrote,

Water drips from the roof of the house,
drip, drip, drip, drip
the water goes off the roof,
you can hear it here and even other there
you can hear it everywhere,
now the leaves are dropping from the trees.