Wednesday 15 April 2020

Tricky Problem


today at home I did this task about the 9 stars and two stars got stolen and we had to make the end of the story and had to explain how the family got the two stars back up into the dark black sky.

1 comment:

  1. Good work Kohen! I love the ending you rewrote and how the you made it so the patupaiarehe thought that the sky was too bright. To make it BTB you could explain what the original story is about in your caption.
    Keep up the hard work Kohen!

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